Center all the wording on the page, especially the main image.
make a page dedicated to all of the cities you service *seo
change your title to include oakland county, or more importantly, the main cities you service. *seo
The phone number literally scrolls away and never repeats. You should have that in bold letters on the top of every page along with the line "OPEN 24/7 365 DAYS"
list if you're licensed or insured
change your email address to email@example.com
and put an out forward on it to your hotmail account.
fix this sentence: Welcome to pyramid lock open 24/7 for the following service's.
I would have a page with a PDF or JPG file that people can print that has your phone number in an easy to cut out credit card size image people can store in their glovebox or wallet.